by Anonnymous
It's just that simple! Well-written stories are always welcome.
Your story would be quite good if you got some advice from an experienced Editor.
And did some proof-reading.
And checked that you were using the correct spelling of the word for the context!
E.g. "Leslie looks up at DJ passed his spent cock ".
The spelling in this context would be 'past', NOT 'passed'!
And she becomes the submissive partner to the young man. That he turns her into his private little sex toy and cum slut.
I would love to see more of this good beginning.
I stop reading after the 3rd paragraph. Maybe writing is just not your thing.
No more of this story as she pulled his "Cock" off and now he is a 'Pussy..!!* LOL
I just so want to be that boy!! Getting every mans wish come true!! A woman that wants him all the time!! Enthralled and want lots more!!
Good start to a hot story but you said to be continued and you haven't