All Comments on 'Steps Taken Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

great series; can't wait for Ch.03

mBrowmBrowover 11 years ago
Nicely written

Engaging and naughtily erotic. Thanks!

BionicThumbsBionicThumbsover 11 years ago
Great work!

I love the story so far, and i cant wait for ch3. It should be great considering all the directions you take it in. Good job and i will be checking back in frequently for your next installment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
I want a Mommy too:)

...every young man, wants to find himself in this intensely erotic situation. A wonderful beginning, to what hopefully, will be a continuing saga of lust, fun and happiness for all parties. Great story-telling!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
pedophile?

You know that's exactly what authors like you sound like with your repetitive mommy, daddy B.S.. Closet pedophiles...

dirtywhiteboy67dirtywhiteboy67over 3 years ago
4☆s

Good sex but I just don't like 'mommy' play. Daddy play is even worse.

I'm actually into incest stories, I just don't like Parent/offspring incest, not even pretending. Step parent is fine as long as there is no Mommy or Daddy name calling.

Rancher46Rancher46about 3 years ago

Looks like he going to have his private harem. Lucky guy

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Nice balance between action and level of detail.

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