All Comments on 'Steps Taken Ch. 04'

That was just plain awesome. Love the reveal that Erica was Jackie's adoptive daughter, an excellent little twist. I also like how Jackie specifically says to David that once dad comes back, it's over *in the house*. This could easily be worked around if, say, they were to go away on a trip while dad was busy with work, perhaps? Also loved the introduction of Rachel and Sarah. Hopefully David will be getting lots of sexy fun times with them as well in the near future.

A very sexy story, but where's the incest? Nobody is related, so it's just normal?? sex. Unless son and dad are...!

So I guess you plan to keep cuckolding the dad? I'll be honest and say I like this story but if it goes the cuckold route any more than it already has then I'm done with it! I don't think there is anything erotic about betraying your family members! Just being honest!

Do not have the father involved sexually and bring on the ladies' friends!

Wouldn't mind in the least if you focused more on Erica and Rachel with the son. Possibly re-introducing Sarah joining the father and Jackie.

Loved this installment and the twist about Erica being basically an adopted daughter was great. I feel like David should respect his Father and his relationship with Jackie and try to end the affair, having Jackie try to continue it *outside the home*. David being so attracted to her giving in to temptation once or twice but then ending it after the guilt from betraying his Father becomes overwhelming, and Jackie understanding and respecting him for it. David could then turn his full attention to Erica, maybe introducing Rachel into a session and have both David and Erica realise the true feelings they have for eachother. Possibly leading to David deciding to propose at some point during the wedding ceremony or reception. Those are a few suggestions pick and choose as you please or use none at all its up to you, because at this point you have written a great story without me and i'm almost positive the rest will be even better!

I don't know too many writers here and I do enjoy there stories do not ever end the stories right. I think this story is perfect the way it is. If you want to keep using the characters do so, but start a new thread and do it like you've done this one around a specific event. just my two 2 cents great job!!!!

so far all you have done is prove that none of them has any love for the others if they did they wouldn't be cheating. delete and start over and bring some love to the story and keep the cuckolding and cheating out of it.

Great story line...liked the play with both women and him...what a threesome..the care between them all...this can go a lot further with the three and their friends...I hope you do that!

How about adding Rachel to the mix with Erica? Potential exist that there could be a forgotten brother of Erica's to join Rachel. With honeymoons and vacation possibilities abounding for erotic get togethers. Enjoyed this story!

It confuses me by the ending of whether or not Erica had feelings for David since she didn't allow him to fuck and cum in her pussy while all 3 were together,and Erica seemed to want more of Jackie.Maybe Erica just wanted to give Jackie one last fuck with David before his Father came home,then Erica could have David to herself.

I just wish the author had clarified whether David and Erica had become a couple and ended up Married and such,but oh well still a decent read.

Just a damn shame the sequel you alluded to never appeared.

But well worth 5 Stars!

Rapier

What a great series though disappointed the author elected to no continue it as this was written 14 years ago. It amazes me why a gifted author would talk about continuing the story and yet abandon it. This was a 5 star writing and was hopeful to see the wedding and a happily ever after for David and Erica. 5++ stars

Deliciously erotic! Definitely a "stroke story" to orgasm! Poor Sarah needs a "cabana boy" experience. Poor Rachel needs some loving also. The direction of your writing indicates dad, son, Jacquie & Erica are all going to end up in bed together so, START COMPOSING! And Thank you, your story was HOT!

Great story looking forward to more