All Comments on 'Still Hot! Ch. 06'

why, when he found out that caroline was screwing ex-freind tony to make him drop ex-wife marissia, why didn't he say anything? it it made so ill he almost threw up - he felt the betrayal over again. so why didn't he say anything?

I've enjoyed this series. This story had more character development with Nadine, which was really nice. Personally I don't think Carmen's revenge is that well thought out, it seems like her brother is getting hurt again, oh well. Keep going.

I really like this whole story, and have really enjoyed reading it. My only complaint is the Carmen's revenge plot. Tony and Marissa can do series damage to Mike's life. I would think his best plan is just to stay away from them. He does not want his "family" life to become public, and if he ends up having a messy devorce with Marissa thats a good posibility. Not to mention the fact that Tony gets to sleep with Carmen. Does not sound too bad for him (lol).

While I'm enjoying this series , the sister sleeping with the ex-best friend in order to get revenge on him and the soon to be ex-wife seems like it's asking for trouble. It does seem like he's about to be in pain again. The thought of her being with him makes him sick it seems and rightfully so. Even if he and the sister hadn't been together he'd still feel the same way I think.

I hope you touch on that more please.

this is one great story love ever bit of the fucking and anal i thought that you could have got mike to go back to his ex wife and fuck her as well. but none the less great bit of writing keep up the good work you are one good writer

Thanks for the great feedback. I know some are wondering what is taking so long on the next chapter. Mostly it is that I am sick. Also I got a little down after some negative feedback I recieved in the last few weeks. I don't know if some people were doing it to be mean, or just targeting me, but I'm a person and I do have feelings so despite my best efforts it got me down. Maybe if I wasn't sick it wouldn't have gotten to me as much.

I do have the next chapter half written, but it is already longer than all the previous chapters. I can't split it up because I have definate ideas for what I want to happen in each chapter. Once I feel better I will update you all on here and submit the story as soon as possible. Sorry for the wait, but I prefer to write when I feel better and don't want to ruin the chapter because of being sick.

Also, my 30th birthday is coming up in two weeks so I might be feeling down about getting older, but I WILL definately have the story completed & submitted before my 30th birthday on Aug, 14th. Thanks.

good work keep writing.

really loving the series, my only dislike would be the revenge plot thing, for one it could just backfire, (i know its fiction and won't but still) and then tony got some free poon, and on top of that, it kinda makes carmen unappealing if you're mike. otherwise i love the story, you take time to develope characters and plot which most authors skip. great job.

-where's chapter 7? it says coming next week, but its been 2 months :(

i liked the story until i got to the part where the older sister said she fucked his ex-bestfriend. i think it is a mistake. are you ever going to finish this story.

When are you going to let us read the next chapter?

Its been a couple of months, and for one I liked your

Work its well above average.

Well i've read the series and love it so far waiting for the next charpeter.

need 2 hear da ending! great story bi da way nice plot.

i friggin love this whole stroy and i am very hungry to read the next chaptor this story line and plot is totally awsome

please finish

this is one of the best stories i have read on the site

i would like to see mike screw his boss also

Eagerly awaiting your next chapter. if you ever plan on publishing it.

i like the series bout you shouldnt leave us hanging ilke that

balls. too bad it has to be a girl who wants revenge on the cheating slut and her paramour. If only our hero had a pair maybe we would see some good ass kicking going on. Rah for the sister.

When are you submitting the next chapter?!?!?!

I just have to ask that question, seeing as you haven't updated since '05. You should really continue this story, it's a shame to leave such an awesome tale incomplete. I have to say that Carmen's "revenge plan" is a little screwed up, especially given that it involves having sex with the very same man that betrayed her brother. It makes me wonder if she really cares about her brother at all.

I got to say this is a great story but where is the rest of it, the last addition was five years ago when are you going to add Nadine?

you have the writing skills, and we need it!

got to agree with the others. cant wait for you to wrap up the series.

whens chapter 7 comin out they are great...

I've gone into 'panic' mode!! When will we see Chapter 7?

This story is like a drug, and I need another 'fix'!

I'm really looking foword to ch7

Really enjoying this story, and looking forward to the continuation, great job

I think were all curious about chapter 7 , please post it or tell us your not going to

When will we get to see chapter 7??? Excited to see it!!!

Quick please

This was an AMAZING story!! Don't stop please!! Well written AND developed!! More ASAP!!!

Sure would like to see the next chapter. I have really enjoyed the story so far. Am anxious to see what comes next.

Hello. I've enjoyed the first six parts of the story. When are you planning to post the next part? It has been around 10 years since your last post (Chapter 6). Please post Chapter 7 soon.

Thank you

Get off the crapper and write another chapter!

lol

I was kinda bummed out when I realized this was the last chapter and the story was unfinished. You've obviously got fans judging by the rating and the comment section (myself included). Please, finish this story!

the begining might be a little disconcerting, after it's a marvel. Thank you LadysMan (spike)

Damn shame, this was a good story.

BUT AN ABRUPT ENDING...WOULD HAVE LIKED TO SEE HIM AND NADINE FUCK THEN HIM GET ALL THREE WOMEN PREGNANT AND THEM LIVE TOGETHER AS ONE BIG HAPPY FAMILY...THE ONLY THING WAS THE BULLSHIT ABOUT CARMEN FUCKING TONY...WHY...NO NEED FOR THAT COULD HAVE GOT A HOOKER TO ENTICE HIM AWAY THEN DUMP HIM...

Whatever happened to chapter 7?? I thought the story was great, but it needed to finish the story.

Great story I love the passion can’t wait for the next chapter. Can’t leave us hanging

Next chapter. Please upload fast

another unfinished story. I really do wish authors would write the whole thing before submitting just like a novelist does for a publisher. Then we might get to read all of it.

What a shame, such a hot story too.

Nice slow development, and exciting foils moving the story forward. I even liked the flashbacks fleshing out the background.

But you killed the story with carmen's revenge plot of fucking tony. Sorry but that's bullshit and only something a stupid whore would come up with and I dated a stupid whore before so I should know. Glad it's an unfinished story.

Looking forward to the next chapter

Wished it continued. Not sure what happened.

Great story, I wish to read more it.

WHAT HAPPENED? WHY IS THE STORY UNFINISHED? OH WELL.

Pretty sure I'd be livid at Carmen. Tony fucked his wife, and ruined his marriage. He goes to Mom's place and really reconnects with his family, then his sister goes and bones Tony? Even if she is trying to fuck over Marissa, his sister gave herself to the traitorous ex-friend that ruined his marriage. Given that the story is dead, that's a shitty note to go out on.

Seeing that it was 17 years since LadysMan’s last contribution, it seems safe to say something has happened to him. He seemed to be on a roll with regular submissions. From the dates, this was probably his last. Too bad; I was looking forward to the next chapter of Sister in the Cabin, also one of his last.

His websites and contacts are dead links; maybe Lit can shed some info on his situation.

Not lookin’ good…

Marvin

Loving this story

Such a shame this story didn't continue.

Nadine's turn to get laid , then it's parrrte time. Fabulous foursome in honor of dad.

Seeing a continuation of this story would have been good. But it would appear the author ceased writing in 2005.

Shame, I was enjoying his stories.

damn - he stopped writing

Even good the second time around, sigh!