All Comments on 'Stoking the Fire Ch. 02'

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Phxray54Phxray54over 13 years ago
Wonderful Story

Being American, sorry, sometimes gets in the way of understanding of your use of local terminology. But that does not take away from the beauty of the blossoming of new love. The characters are real to me and your narrative well written and easy to follow. I look forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
excellent sequel

This chapter follows directly from the first, and continues the same excellent plot. However, this is obviously a romance story, not an erotic couplings story, just as is the case with the previous chapter and the one that follows this one.

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