All Comments on 'Stolen Kisses'

One of the bests I have ever read.

Hey like the story good one ...really good one ...I bet this is a real story or could really happen ...but love this

Let me see if I have this right, you're going to use my real thing as a substitute for your fake thing which you need in order to properly fantasize about getting the real thing and have another orgasm so you can sleep.

Hehehe, best line of the story.

this was an incredible way of seduction. As usual, your class.........

you could have made the before surgery part a but more spicier, to reinforce Jess's intentions a bit more explicit.

I could not stop

I loved this stoy i could not stop reading this

All good thing must come to an end but i was sad to see this

one go.

I really liked it a lot, but what I really like is the ending, its like a movie with all the climax and stuff (honestly, I didn't see it coming).

A couple of phone calls put in during the build-up from the parent from overseas would make it more realistical and more believable but its no biggie and won't affect your 5-STARS story!

Overall, well-paced, romantically sexy, realistic and most importantly the binding of brother-sister relationship just like your other story - Words on Skin!

Well done, looking forward for something more like this!

Classic and sweet

You are the very best author I have read on this website. I couldn't stop reading until the end. Keep up the fantastic work. More! More!

Another great & well written story!

I like the way you think.

I've never commented on a story on here before, and here I am commenting on the second of yours in an hour... you're far too good at this.

only one wrd amazinggggg.......

You truly have a gift. Thank you for such a wonderful story, it makes me regret being an only child. If a only I had such a wonderful sister!

Holy SHIT! This story was AMAZING! Totally WICKED! You should really think about becoming a professional author! I would DEFINITELY buy your book/books! SERIOUSLY!

Jesus, you have the best imaginative stories. I can't get enough of them. I also really hope you make other stories like this and words on skin. Good luck bro.

I loved this story, the title and theme was great, I liked how the beginning led to the end and it was OUT OF CONTROL erotic. Really good stuff, keep up the good work

You really showed their feeligs toward eachother and made the story more intament, great job

this was quite a story. i am not mormally into long drawn out works but this kept my attention the whole time. loved the whole thing. and the way she kept throwing little parts of herself to him made me think she was not a virgin but it was in my head. very well written and amazing story

I was totally blown away by your earlier story "Words On Skin" and thought that there was no way that story could be equaled or even topped. But you did it with this story! Regardless of what people think about incest. You have taken it and turned it into something that goes beyond just sex. Keep writing!! I'll continue reading.

to describe and respond to your story. You are, IMO, the best writer on literotica. Dailogue, pacing, plot, characterization--you've got it all down pat. You HAVE to be a "real" (i.e., serious) author slumming in a kinky neighborhood. Three cheers; five stars; whatever superlatives I can think of. Thank you!

brilliant soft smooth and gentle but exciting and exhilerating ultimately satisfying

You are truly an amazing author. I don't know how, but almost every single one of your stories is extremely compelling and is able to flesh out real characters effortlessly. To sum it up: masterful.

i love the way you bring your characters to life. you make this more than a story. i felt like i was in the story, in their hearts n minds. keep up the good work.

Absolutely fantastic, i've read hundreds off stories on this site and this one just completely tops them all. Thank you for the extremely enjoyable read.

Wow, just wow, I never like to post comments on anything nsfw, such as videos, pictures, drawings, etc, But this was so good I can't deny it, not only hot as hell(I have a thing for brother-sister stuff) but it was well written, I'm glad I read the whole thing, instead of just skip to the last page and rub one out. I love this story, its well formatted, very descriptive, with some comedy on the side, very well done sir, thank you for this

very well done story, nice tease, great timimg, wonderful love showed in the writting....... nicely done

Very well written. The subtle details really create a feeling of realism. I loved the wittiness of certain moments, like the dildo sniff/lick. I'll be reading your other stories, for sure. Not only was it interesting enough to read through, (I made it to page 6 before allowing my bullet vibe to go uninterrupted) but so hot as well!

This is one of the best stories I've read in a long time. The characters were believable, the continuity very smooth and the story line believable. 5 stars.

Loved it! Not usually into the brother-sister stuff but this story reeled me in until the end! You should do more non-chapter stories! I do not read them any way!

I read this because I thought your "Words on skin" was one of the gentlest, most sensitively written pieces I have ever read in this genre.

Having now read this I admire your style and talent even more.

You storytelling skills show the world that despite what society dictates, true love transcends any barriers.

A hundred stars would not do this story justice.

very impressive. well written. great flow. i am thoroughly impressed.

A stunning story,well written - that also made me laugh out loud at some of your ''deceptions'' !!

Good portrayal of the main characters - very good.

Thanks for an excellent read.

Very good story. Good character development. Nice job. I enjoyed it completely.

This is True Love. Keep them together for life.

Great Story, one of the best all time I've read, great job pal.

Even many men do n ot appreciate the strenght of a loving woman... this one is remarkable and he is lucky to be the recipient.

I'm not effusive but wow.

This is really well written. Amazing. The little plot hooks, the romance, the descriptions and the dialogue, all perfect. For me though, a pity with the boob job, sounds like she wouldn't have needed that. That was the pillar of the whole setup though, so it works for this story.

Pleaseeeeee do a second part! I am begging you! Best ever!

Along with "Words On Skin," easily the best seduction story I've ever read. I wish I could have given it six stars.

I second the previous comment, that story along with Words On Skin, was a work of art, completely perfected. You Sir/Madam, are a genius. There is no other way of putting it.

I just came myself!

Agreed with the last commentators. Along with "Words on Skin", this story is my favorite here on Literotica.

The breast operation did make me hesitate a bit, but in the end it just gives the story character. Or something like that.

I really like how you portray the sister personalities. They seem a lot more vivid and lovable than the brothers, meaning it should have been the brothers who would have had the crushes! I suppose the brothers just weren't awake enough to notice. Just kidding.

Anyway, I love your stories and hope you will write more like this. Thanks a lot!

This one and Words on Skin are awesomely sexy stories. More like these!!!

great story,and the little side trips just make it all the better. Only problem I have is trying to pick between this and words on skin as the best storys on lit.

Definitely the best story I've ever read on this site. Wow. Well written.

Thank you

Wow oh wow... I love the little tangents and the little games. Very, VERY nice

Very well done. ;)

Wow! I didn't want this story to end, it was that good. I'm gonna have to read your other works now!

There are so many comments written so much better than i can say it. Please keep writing and thank you

OMG... I think "im in love" with you!! Love ur stories :) keep on writing xxx

Loved every word of it! A young beautiful sister who wants to be with her older brother and so builds an entire scheme so she could have him...what a story ! Keep itup cause this is a really good read.

its rare but i didn't have "this line and its ridiculous / unbelievable progression just ruined the entire story"

good read! i even forgot to do what i came for ;)

I couldn't read it b/c the first page you wasted a million words on how pretty she was. It was annoying. That's why I can't read female and male stories its all about the woman and how hot she is. That's why I can't read them. I'm not lesbian I wanted to hear how hot the brother was. I think people should have a side note on how pretty the girl is so we get it. And then write the story but the first page is how pretty she is I swear I can't read male and female stories. I'm going back to gay male stories now. Buh bye.

VERY nice! Love, humor, trust & two attractive people.

I would LOVE to read another chapter or four as they progress in life.

Your an amazing writer, not only did I enjoy the story, it felt like I was there, you really had me very emotionally attached to these characters and the humor you've intertwined into the dialogue is nothing short of genius on your part. This is a wholeheartedly believable story that will live on with me, not just as an amazing story I had the pleasure of reading, but as a very fond memory. I wish only the best for you, and if not already success as a writer professionally, because you truly deserve it. I can honestly say your the most talented writer I've come across on here, and very much look foward to reading more from you. This was a beautiful story, thank you so much for sharing it with us.

I really like this story and Words on Skin. I like the little touches like the last paragraph above. I like the way both of these stories mix an unknown love, deception, sex, romance and finally truth. Way more satisfying than simple lust. Thanks.

One of the best I have read. Bravo!

The brother had no chance :) really good job on the story

One of the very best

Absolute classic

I love you for what you have achievec

You are on the top ten of all time

Infact , its between u and youbadboy

Goodluck

Amazing. Reminded me of Words on Skin.... shared childhood memories must've done it. Easily my two fave stories.

That the lovers are brother and sister. I see a love that I myself am seeking, though not from a sibling, full and well built. I may have to stop reading your work for the pure and simple reason that your fiction is making dealing with non fiction that much harder. Maybe one day i can find my own fiction.

That was an awesome story. I can't wait for the next chapter. They definitely deserve another. Thanks for writing it!

Fantastic writing and excellent storytelling. Definitely one of the better crafted stories on Lit. Your's is the real deal in a veritable sea of turds. Exceptionally well done.

Another 5 Star story!

I love Jess

True she knows what she wants and willing to go after it. Though considering all in all looks like he's been gotten

I really enjoyed your story. I love the buildup of their relationship and while it didn't seem realistic, per se, it certainly seemed natural and "believable." Well-done. I will go check out more of your stories.

Very well presented. Loved it!

Please add more to this one

The way your characters interact is what sells this. The dialogue may be the best on this site.

The love between these two people was quite clear to me even before they explicitly declared it. You've caught that moment brilliantly. This story went far beyond the usual incest stroke and pop story. More, please. You have a gift. Use it....

Jazz

This has to be one of the best I have read. Doesn't seem nasty or even wrong. Two people in love deeply and even though she connived and lied and set things up it worked out. He remained strong as long as possible. I loved it.

One of the best Brother/Sister Virgin stories I've read in a while...Glad to see some good authors still out there...

Pacofears, great tale beautifully written. This truly read well, with a beginning-middle-and finish. You are quite masterful with story development.

This is the first of your stories I have enjoyed, as I am new to Literotica. But I am sure it will be the not be the last. Thanks.

I don't know what's sexier: Jess's body or her mind; she's a devious little thing, and it's really attractive.

Perhaps her and Winston can double date with Lizzie and Scooter?

what a awesome story amazing love

It is so refreshing to read a story which has been so well thought out and with no visible grammatical errors - which is so rare these days. More to this story would be welcome.

One of, if not the best story here! I echo all of the other comments, it is wonderfully refreshing to read a story written by someone with a passion for the story, not just lust haha! Expertly crafted!

It's perfect the way it stands. I love the way she says Tunny. I picture a very slight pause just before she says it and an almost imperceptible shake of her head. Tunny is not the idiot that most brothers are made out to be. It's like he along for the E-ticket ride. Wonderfully written.

You are just amazing me, story after story. It's like you have read mind and have written it all down. I am so addicted to your stories it's kind of ridiculous. I would buy two of this one as well. On to the next story I go. Thank you for giving me exactly what I needed.

-Andeiria (screen name not actual, of course)

This story was wonderful, i especially like the way you have the sister planning it out the entire time and the reluctance slowly chipped away unlike a number of stories on this site, this i believe is the second best story i have read on this site, the first of course being "Words on Skin" the first story of yours i read and from which i found this story

"well, never. I don't write sequels for my sibling stories. For me, the magic and tension are expended when they surrender to their romantic/taboo desires. It's up to you guys to picture the ho-hum details of everyday life that follow."

That was a quote of yours from a couple of years back, and although I can level with you in that aspect, sometimes we need guidance on what will happen next in these characters lives. I know its a lot to ask, but maybe for the sake of us having something to go off of, could you perhaps write a small extension that couples with either this or Words on Skin, so that we may have some idea of...what you would picture happening to either of these character plots?

For PoMaster and other kind souls like him who have pled for follow-on stories to my sibling tales: thank you all. I take these requests as the best indication that I put together something entertaining. But now that you've enjoyed a story that I enjoyed writing, the cycle is complete. I have no plans to ever post a sequel to Words on Skin or Stolen Kisses. If I post something to Lit in the future it will not be related to either of those stories. I have had a Macallan novel and a lesbian urban fiction novel (working title, "Just a Little Sin") in draft for years now. Alas, spare time in the quantity required to get them completely to paper is in ridiculously short supply these days. Life does tend to get in a fella's way.

You have an amazing writing style! I loved this story you added such depth. I also read "Words On Skin" that was also absolutely amazing! WOW! I am blown away! Thank you so much for sharing!!

After reading Words on Skin, I thought the sister was going to say that the boob job was faked (as in the whole "no Chip" thing). But she didn't, which caught me pleasantly by surprise. 5/5.

I have Read this and your other stories multiple times over you are å great writer and i always enjoy your work

The hymen is on the outside of the vaginal opening - it is part of the vulva. There is no way he would have felt a barrier two inches up that would have been the hymen - maybe the cervix?

Tired of seeing this error in stories as it confirms that men have no idea how a lady-body works.

She risked so much on this plan of hers... scamming her folks had no downside for him if it worked out... but she could have succeeded at her task and then had him figuring it was all unforgivable, unwilling to accept the honesty or rightness in anything she said or did (ignoring the whole incest idea as right out wrong) - nobody likes to be REALLY tricked, especially by someone they care for...

It wouldn't have been surprising if she'd cried when he showed the pills he bought - effectively pointing out he knew he couldn't trust her when she's left to her own devices.

I and someone I knew used to lie to each other all the time in play... the safe word when one felt it was too far was "True?". I also found it interesting that he felt that his asking for honesty upfront for future actions would prevent her being deceitful as regards those actions. It's a type of trust that allows for perceived untrustworthiness...

Wow. That's all I can say. Honestly one of the best pieces of erotic fiction I've ever read (and yeah, I've read a lot!) The buildup was just so remarkable, and the perfect balance between hot fantasy but the thrill of reality, and the relationship dynamic... Everything just left me speechless! Well, that and the multiple multiple squirting female orgasms I just had. It's so refreshing to see somebody who actually has impeccable writing skill and understands the excitement of the buildup; the seduction and can play with it in a way that drives the senses to their height. I'll definitely be reading way more of your stories!

I've read a lot of Incest stories, and this is certinally up their in the top 10... Great writing...

Bravo, PacoFear, you have an amazing way of keeping a reader into a long ass story like this. I have read many stories on here but none match the writing talent that you have. Its amazing to me how real the characters seem to to be in my mind as I read.I have an entire scene in my mind playing out as I read your stories. Im actually disappointed when the stories end because .I feel like I know the characters, I want to know more and the story ends. I would love to see more from these two characters. Keep up the good work Paco

Absolutely brilliant, had me laughing hysterically between raging boners.

It was beautiful, and the ending wonderful...

I gave it five stars!

Every time I read onda of your stories I love it. Please keep writing your very talented

Them nuances. :)

Like your story. This story was just not based on sex but had a really good plot.

Xxx..

By rights, I should have passed on this as soon as you warned about the anal leanings of your story. As far as that goes, it had the usual effect of pushing a bro-sis love affair into the realm of unbelievable standard raunchy lust. I was warned so no harm, no foul. I don't get though, why she'd choose to surrender her maidenhead to a toy, albeit at her brother's hand, in place of having him do it. Since they'd already crossed all possible lines anyway and she was clearly willing to risk unprotected sex by her own admission, that one made me shake my head in final disbelief. I, of course set aside the actual anatomical issues of where a hymen is situated and the previous penetration past that depth because it's such a common thing on this site. Playing along with the Literotica concept of where a hymen is situated, it still seemed a silly choice from her.

I had no issues with the elaborate slow plan unfolding (it's why I gave into curiosity to read this) also, I found the whole surgical implant thing unpleasant and unfortunate yet you managed to sell that aspect as reasonable for her to want to do that to herself. Not an easy task. Trust me. So I congratulate you on a "believably told" story of very poor credibility if that makes sense. I liked parts of it in spite of myself. Thanks.

MPP