All Comments on 'Stolen Love'

I have never read anything so poorly written in my entire life. Sentences that make absolutely no sense, and nothing at all erotic. Please stop writing garbage.

I had to laugh because it was so poorly written!

Right in your very first paragraph, you misspell "medal." <i>Shane was a young man that received the highest metal that a brave soldier can possibly earn...Purple Heart.</i> And I would suggest when talking about a soldier who is awarded a medal for his valor or service, that you might want to indicate his rank, and which branch of the U.S. Armed Forces he served in (Marines, Navy, Army, etc.)

<br><br> Then you jump straight from talking about how Shane was awarded the Purple Heart, into saying he was also an exceptional lover! And throw in some nonsense about how no matter what race, no woman would deny him sex? Why did you throw race into the mix like that?<br><br>

<i>I know this for a fact because Jackson, my husband of one year would never lie to me. A good father but only a fair lover, who helped bear Jackson Jr. before he went off to war with his twin brother Shane. My one and only.</i><br><br>

This is the point where I broke into derisive laughter and stopped reading. So, the writer's husband supposedly has told her that his twin is an exceptional lover and that no woman can resist his brother? Bwaaaahaaaahaaaaaaaaaaa!!!<br><br>

And no offense to the wonderful fathers out there, but the only one who actually bears a child is the mother. It's not like the couple can actually take turns with "bearing" a child. But the visual you presented was pretty hilarious. <br><br>