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wjthermanwjthermanabout 15 years ago
One of the best!

Easily one of the best erotic stories I've ever read! Outstanding!!!

Agoodman954Agoodman954about 15 years ago
WOW

Sexual sentual and heart wrenching. Is it better to love and lost then never to have loved at all. It seems to me that Gerry was brought to the hight of lustful elation in one night only to be allowed to drop back into the daily grind of an empty life with nobody to go home to yet again. It reminds me of the quote by H.D.T. "Most men lead lives of silent desperation." It seems to me that Gerry's life will be even more desperate, but then again he does have a memory that so few men are allowed to have. The delicious love of a beautiful sentual woman that he will savor for the rest of his life ... and then she was gone as so many of them are.

TwoHOTFORU69TwoHOTFORU69about 15 years ago
She..!

She (Lily) has to come back and the heck with the dream this time ! Almost gave you a 5 because of the way it ended - but I could not do it.! Damn I have a soft heart. Great story but could have and should have ended different, maybe someone will add to this one and complete the story.! Thanks. JAG/TSO

marklionmarklionabout 15 years ago
Great story!!! With A Twist!!

I liked the story that you wrote about Gerry and his Lily. The scenes were good and even the twisted the end was OK. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
the best in ages

The most erotic story that I have read in ages. Can't wait to read more of your work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
nice but sad

i liked this but it's so sad. I'm a sucker for happy endings,would you consider doing a continuation to this story?But honestly one of the nicer stories I've come across.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

W O W great story.

Keep up the good work.

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