All Comments on 'Stormy Night Ch. 02'

by flman

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Please Please Please Edit

This could have been a good story, however the obvious errors were distracting.

don87654don87654over 16 years ago
A good start.....

A lot of misspelled words--it is sorta obvious you are wanking your cock as you wrote this. It could have been much more erotic if you had fucked her and given her a fifth baby..

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
I love the kerosene lambs

- tasty!

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