All Comments on 'Straight to the Beach'

Good job but not long enough Hope there is a part two

Interesting writing style. Split infinitives, misplaced modifiers etc. etc.

It would be a struggle, but you should try the seventh grade again.

Lucky it wasn't me he stumbled across, he might have gotten a lip lock on his cock!

That was just rude. Most writers here are not pros. Constructive criticism is usually welcome; your comments did not qualify as such. You didn't even have the balls to sign in and leave a name. Maybe you should go back to kindergarten and learn some manners.

I'm going to the wrong beaches, damnit

Sitting in Afgahniland on deployment wishing I had a cock to keep my entertained email me sheltermonkey84@gmail.com

I'm 55, straight, and in incredibly good shape. I couldn't help but think if I were Angus I would have fucked your mouth like there were no tomorrow. I'm currently sitting in my hotel room away from my wife, and as usual I'm watching hardcore gay porn and reading hot stories like yours, with my oiled 9 inch cock in my fist. After I spewed my cum all over your mouth and face I would have returned the favor, sucking your hot cock in my eager mouth and rolling your smooth balls around my mouth until you came all over me, and then I would have gotten you rock hard again and let you fuck the hell out of my tight, straight, virgin ass, you grabbing my hips and fucking like there were no tomorrow until you moaned and sprayed your cum all over me. Yeah. Just like that.

I often dream of this happening to me and only hope to meet someone like you one day at the beach. I don't think I'd walk away in a hurry. But, until it happens I'll just have to rely on my imagination and masturbate in the sandhills alone. I've been sucked off once many years ago by a gay guy and can still remember that wonderful feeling. I relive it often as I masturbate.

I used to visit certain beaches in my 20s , Most of them remote , where I could swim naked and sunbathe without being disturbed... I'd gone to this particular beach on a glorious Sunday morning , expecting to be alone - but when I got to the car park there was an expensive looking BMW parked there.. as I wandered along the beach in my speedos I saw a figure going into the dunes , so I made a beeline for there ....

He was laying naked on his back , reading a book and I startled him when I spoke

" Hi there .. lovely day " I called out from below him

He scrambled to cover himself - to no avail , his cock was erect and too BIG ...

" Sorry , must have got carried away " he apologised

I noticed the title of the book and laughed then introduced myself ( Charlie ) and he replied Ben

" Got me that way too when I read it " - the book was a graphic account of a mans experimentation with bisexuality and was truly graphic ...

" How far you got ?" I asked as I sat down next to him

" Just finished chapter 2 "

" Ohh the sauna part - very hot " I laughed " Excuse the pun " I carried on

" you bi then ? " Genuine question

After a short silence he spoke

" Don't really know - I do know that the section in the sauna really turned me on "

I could see , his cock which had become flaccid, now rose again

Taking the lead, I knelt in the sand and lightly touched his shaft.. he made to pull away but I just crooned quietly

" Relax and enjoy " .. he half lay back on his elbows watching my fingers dance up and down , groaning when I slowly slid his foreskin back

" You have a lovely cock " I said , licking my lips

" Let me see yours " he gasped as I wanked him

I stood up and had them off in seconds my cock sticking straight out - before laying down , my head near his crotch and my cock pointing at his head .. I resumed stroking him , but now I introduced small licks to his cockhead - he moaned and squirmed as I did it - I knew it wouldn't be long until he reciprocated , sure enough I felt a tentative hand on my straining cock , then shortly after his tongue !!

In no time at all we were thrashing around 69ing and it wasn't long before I felt the cum rising !... we came together , him pumping a creamy load into my hungry mouth ( which I gulped down greedily ) , but he was different - as soon as I started spurting he rolled his head away , coughing and spluttering and he got a 'pearl necklace' mostly ...

After his coughing had stopped ( and he had washed his mouth out with water ) , he lay back and I said to him

" First time ? "

He nodded

" it gets better " I said smiling

" I enjoyed doing it , but wasn't expecting a mouthful of your cum " he replied

" I love the taste of yours " I smiled ( the truth ) , " can't wait for another protein shot " I added... I got that 2 hours later after a long slow session Ben was more than eager to go all the way this time and I tapped him when I started to cum , feeling him gulp it down as I spawned .. his orgasm was almost the same as his first ( though a little watery ) ... we spent 6 hours in the dunes, leaving when the sun dropped , and returning quite a few times over the years .

This is really a good story. You've described a normal, enjoyable day at a beach, relaxing and reading while accidentally meeting a new acquaintance. The sex scene you described was well written, and mostly enjoyable.

I say "mostly" because at the very last moment of the sex scene (and, as it happened, of their acquaintance) you turned this into a Non-Consent/Reluctance story. "He sounded guilty and desperate, but I thought he had gone too far to stop by then." Maybe he was guilty and desperate, but it was the main character who went too far, by decided to not stop when asked, no, begged to do so. Please give a warning at the start of stories like this, or change the category.

Anyway, good NC/R story. I hope you continue to write.

Oh man that got me hard and spurting cum all over myself - more please

Lucky people. Need to go to the beach by myself...