All Comments on 'Stranded'

You Did Good !

I Thoroughly enjoyed your creation !

THANKS !

Damn, what a fantasy. A great fantasy.

A VERY NICE NARRATION INDEED.

Perhaps if they had been stranded just a little further from civilization and with a few less supplies, they might have had to "rough it" just a little more. Still, it's a good story. You might have had a "rescue" party show up, after about a week, You could have the rescuers show up unnoticed, and then leave after peering in the jeep's window notice that the poor stranded people were all stark naked and screwing like rabbits...and then, quietly leave!

please write more

ya been there when it rains, never got lucky enough to get two girls, just acers of mud and water and....................

How un/lucky can you get. Sex with two beautiful show girls? Everyone should be so unlucky!!

Good story. Good writing, smooth flow.

I never really thought about a cereal killer before.

I have been stuck on a road by flooding more than once.

I sure could have used company like the two gals in this story then!

I like a story that could have really happened. In real life most people don't meet and have sex in the same day. You have a story that shows how trust and caring can still lead to some wild fun. Keep up the good work.