by redskyes
I've been waiting the longest time for a story like this one. It's fantastic and thank you for writing. I can't wait for your next installments!
From one author to another, you have got to stop using the word 'gawd' in your stories. It's in all of them.
Love the story, incredibly hot. Though I do have complaint about the end here, though I suppose it is too late for you to anything about it. Anyway, the bit with Trevor sort of comes across as cheating or something.
Like I wouldn't be surprised if Violet is upset and angry at Amy for having sex with Trevor, not sure about Paula, maybe disappointed or slightly sad though she can't complain because she has a date. Sarah I think would be slightly mad or confused mainly cause they are not exactly sure what they feel for each other.
I know this comment is years late, but I just discovered this story. Kinda disappointed that Trevor, or any other guy really, has a presence in a futa story. I prefer my futa stories without guys. Hopefully this won’t be a regular occurrence.
I agree with Futalover! No dudes! But I am also way late and this comment is wasted.