All Comments on 'Strange Vacation Ch. 03'

It has action, a story line that is well thought out. Plus a little sexual action. Millennium bard writes of living and acting with honor plus courage. This is what attracks me to his stories and this one exspecially. Please keep this story moving along.

This rates along with my best fantasys can't wait for the next installment. The story line is great and I think it would be fantastic expanded in to a novel

Please get on with the tale.

The problem with being breathless with anticipation is that my brain gets starved for oxygen. Please help me breath again by supplying chapter 4.

Thank you

2 years has gotta be enough time to come up with a sizzling next chapter, Pleeeease :D

Please finish this story, even if the hero dies. I do like it so far.Thank You

Sweet story hombre, you gotta finish though, if the last chapter(s) is/are as good at the first three, it'll be the most metal thing I've read so far.

Another vote for completion, i'ts a great story

it was never finished! i guess i wont hold my breath for a new chapter, seeing as it's already been 5 years. i've got to start making sure the stories are finished before i read them. lol. great story.

This is great stuff!

I have little hope this story will ever be completed but it is one of the GREAT stories on this site!

Great writing.

I have really enjoyed your story thus far I'm wondering is that it do we finish it in our own mind or have you just not finished it in your own thought.

You get erased from my reading list. I tried two of your stories and enjoyed both of them until you left them without an ending. That is rude and unacceptable behaviour and in my mind you no longer exist. Lynn

Loved story and characters... but await what happens next and a happy ending of course.... keep up the good work

Why are unfinished stories from so long ago not noted as such or simply deleted? What a bummer!