by mike969696mike
Yeah, when the bottom struggles, you don't shut them down. You listen. Big scene fail.
The difficulty I have with this story is that she doesn't listen to his feedback: when he asks to stop, to slow down, to pull out, she ignores him. I get that this is a story, in fact, it's HIS fantasy... but in real life, her behavior is a huge red flag, which breaks the immersion for me.
That was a very sexy story.
I have to say you are lucky to have experienced this and I'm jealous.
I've asked my wife to do this with me, no luck yet.
Great story. I would love to see more of your writing.
A great story! Thanks, and I can't wait to hear more.