All Comments on 'Stray'

A very nice story of caring and romance. While not overtly a stroke story, it is something that I enjoyed reading for the caring and even bit of romance involved. Thanks and keep it up!

okay MMM again your knack for making characters warm and real shows itself.

A very god job here. I was rooting for him to find someone from the beginning. i have to admit you got me twice. At first I thought he'd end up with billie until she left and I thought the story was just one of those good samaritan things where he did the right thing and got nothing but a dusty dick for it. Then you got me all geeked up again when they started calling each other on the phone. finally you introduced the mother and they fit like a glove. Great job!! best story I've read today. SS06

He has a new lease on life.

Fine creative writing. Thanks MGM!

Short, sweet, with a happy ending! Anyway, it's always a great thing when an 'old geezer', oops — excuse me, a 'mature older man', gets the girl.

I like your writing and this is an excellent example of it. Nice story with a nice ending. I could do with a lot of those.

MMM,

Light hearted tale. We all need a little sunshine in these dark times. Yes, smoooth.

Thanks for sharing on Lit.

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Sometimes you just write them too good. This was one of the very best.

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But he did get his just rewards anyway. Very good story, it gives us old gizzers hope.

Great story.

One of the best I have read. Great story, it is as if this really happened. Perhaps a bit of truth here?

Thanks for a story that has a man doing the right thing for a young lady, very refreshing.

fun little read

Perfect little read.

I know I sound like a broken record?, cd?, iPad?, but God you can tell a story Magmaman. Fun and tightly plotted story. Thank you.

You sure can tell one. Artfully done. Hope it s true.

And much more realistic than most. Five Stars!

A really CUTE story! I'm glad I read it.

Why do so many of these stories have to contain the guy is hung? I have rarely read a story that didn't claim 7,8 9" cock. Get over it. It does not add to the story. This story had many good elements. Whether it is true or fiction, our hero did not need to add this.

One of the best reads I've had in a long time. Keep them coming. Thanks

All the right buttons pushed - all the best fantasies handled well -

A great outcome for all -

Very nice job lol

about a girl being rescued from an asshole...then going off and having to become a slut in order to live but then found romance with a rich man...then the old guy gets it off with the mother and everything worked out for them all in the end...loved it....love conquers all.....

including the readers.

it just might come your way. TK U MLJ LV NV

heart warming