All Comments on 'Streetwalker'

A WONDERFUL tale of great sex on Halloween! Thank you for reminding me of the Halloween I went as the Jolly Green Giant and left serious amounts of green body paint on two women I adore. I did not like The Sixth Sense, but your way of telling it is GREAT! It's a pity I'm too old for threesomes.

Excellent imagery, and superb ending. Hope you win.

No one's ever too old for threesomes! *grin*

Good luck!

Interesting storyline and a great threesome. Well done. Good luck in the contest.

Very life like story concept. Well written and fun to read. Good luck in the contest.

Good luck for the contest. - UK CYNIC.

Good work. Good luck in the contest.

Seamy supernatural saga on the sleazy side of town. Well done, dude. Good luck in the contest.

Very nice ! TY

Love the ending but for Kylie to work in the story as a ghost. She can't interact with other real people. Darren the trucker was talking to her. Shame you couldn't write it where it seemed Kylie was actually doing things with Darren but when you read it back it was just Stacy involved... as she was the one that could see the paranormal only. Close but no cigar buddy. Cute story but you should do a rewrite