All Comments on 'Strip Foosball'

This story was so well written and made me horny. Loved the ending!

Beth

Great story

i have read many stories here but this one is .......... and what the f.... is foosball?

Writing in the present tense is a nonsense.

Either it happened, past tense, in which case it is interesting, or it didn't, in which case it is mind play, which anyone can do.

Which is it?

I have to agree with the anonymous writer of "tense". Your first two paragraphs were written in the past tense, and were completely believable as you and your wife agreed she could go as far in the game of foosball as the situation required.

But then you switched to present tense, making the rest of the story more like your fantasy than your experience. Too bad, because your fantasy was actually pretty hot...but I'm never turned on by reading other people's fantasies, just by their actual (or believable) experiences.

Another suggestion: flesh out the sex with more details.

Positively, RyeandGinger

german - Tischfussball, engl. table football, am. foosball and nzl. table soccer

I like all stripgame stories, and this one was good.

The story isn't the best I've read, but I enjoy reading the loving wives section of the site and I'm wondering how come so many of the comments are always from people who are "shocked" that someone to find a story about a wife fooling around ----in the LOVING WIVES section. If you have a problem with this type of story, why do you bother reading it?

Now write and tell us how she told you about her adventure, and your adventure while she was away for two weeks.

great story based around a good idea

My ex wife played strip foosball.

this is a well written, fun story.. thank you