by sharonerotica
what the fuck
all it does is repeat for 28 fucking pages
not even really a gangbang
After you read one chapter/page you read the lot, this was 28 pages of boring repeats.
Reading this lot ,but this is nothing compared to the submissions of one particular author[Iam sure we all know who that is]This story in my opinion could have been told in no more than 3 pages,still whatever whats done is done,better luck next time.
not only clothes the last couple years ? has sombody stripped you from your brain too and forgot to give it back ?
OK the gb is over now a very used piece of trash is going home to the boyfriend. Where are the thoughts of what if? What if I am pregnant? What if I have an STD? What if I have AIDS? What if someone tells someone? What if someone took pictures? What if I grow up and realize I am not a mature rational thinking woman? What if boyfriend doesnt want a full gb slut for a girlfriend? What if he throws me out?
Well, well, so there are some ignorant ass-holes on here.
Do they get a kick out of writing such empty abuse? I guess so, otherwise why bother to post it?
Needless to say the ignorant comments are done under "anonymous". They don't even have the courage to give their member name.
I feel really sorry for those sick people.
I know that they won't bother to read this, but I would like them to know that their rudeness didn't bother me at all.
Now constructive criticism can sting, because often the person knows what he/she is talking about.
But those comments just made me laugh. Stick to the comic-strips boys.
To those who liked the story, I send my thanks and best wishes.
Well, well, so there are some ignorant ass-holes on here.
Do they get a kick out of writing such empty abuse? I guess so, otherwise why bother to post it?
Needless to say the ignorant comments are done under "anonymous". They don't even have the courage to give their member name.
I feel really sorry for those sick people.
I know that they won't bother to read this, but I would like them to know that their rudeness didn't bother me at all.
Now constructive criticism can sting, because often the person knows what he/she is talking about.
But those comments just made me laugh. Stick to the comic-strips boys.
To those who liked the story, I send my thanks and best wishes.
You are totally hot. I actually really liked the strip poker part of the story better...just my own preference. I just don't like guys being abusive to women in that way, even if they are enjoying it. I liked how you described what physical sensation was causing you to orgasm, that was cool.
Sharonerotica------good job giving it back to those fuckers who have nothing better to do than to put other people down. I didn't think it was the greatest story ever posted on literotica, but it was well done, easy to read and (at least to this writer) nice and HOT! I m sorry to be so late after the writing to comment, but, please don't be discouraged by stupid people who use their comments to abuse===probably because the are weak kneed cowards who spend the best part of their day cowering in the closet.
This is one of the hottest stories I have read in quite a while. I am looking forward to more.
hates gonna hate. I liked it alot. the winning your money back with your body the hottest part. looking forward to more.