All Comments on 'Student Lesbian BDSM Ch. 08'

by NPC01

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

This has been the best series that I have read on this website. Please keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Perfect

Keep going!!!!!!! It's great!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Awesome!!!

Great work as always. You have me hooked on this series I can't wait to know what happens next between Anna and Erica. I love how you really took the time to develop the characters each time we continue to learn something new about them, what they are thinking, feeling etc. I also like how the story is not rushed to end. Keep it up!

NPC01NPC01over 13 years agoAuthor
Thank-you

Hi,

Just wanted to say thanks to everyone who has commented and sent feedback over the last few submissions.

I would especially like to thank SoCalCynic who kindly edited this story for me. (I forgot to put it at the top. Ooops...)

Azrael556Azrael556over 13 years ago
Suicide is a permanent solution to a temporary problem.

Anna moved on all right. It's a damned shame.

And yeah, I spent part of my second senior year of college with a fifth of Jack Daniels and a loaded .45 trying to decide if the beauty that broke my heart would be the end of me. Been there. Survived it.

IcklepoppetIcklepoppetover 13 years ago
What next?!

I do hope it doesn't end with a dead Anna. Far too depressing at Christmas time! Happy ending for New Year?

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

I'd be a liar if I said I wasn't disappointed, sure hope this isn't it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
That's it?

Watt happens to happy endings?

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Aw! My heart fell for Anna... Don't kill off the main character? Please?!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

WHAT!?! No! Wow I sure hope there's more for this story and soon too! Love it, Well this chapter is a little depressing but a very Good story! :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
........

This can't be it. You can't end it like that! I don't care if you don't want to write the story anymore or whatever, but an ending like that is completely undeserving of such an amazing read. Don't kill her off!! I really hope that there's going to be more... I'll keep an eye open for it. Hope to see it soon... Thanks for writing anyway...

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Ch. 09?

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Good work hope it doesn't end here though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

can't say that patience is one of my best qualities lol. Please let us know if we can expect more. I've enjoyed your work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Awe come on now!?

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
OMG AND........

Omg no way next chapter pls pls love this series of stories ur an awesome writer pls post it soon ive been checkin daily in anticipation. Awesome tho lovit <3 xxx

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
spectacular

this serie is making me feel. its so tender, loving and everything awesome. im impressed by your work and PLEASE more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

I've been checking back for more ever since I first read your stories lol but it ends here no more checking I will have to accept that you ate finished but I must say it was wonderful .. while it lasted.. you are very talented!!

DryhillDryhillover 12 years ago
HATE IT

I do not like this chapter very much. Anna's delibrate overdose reminds me to much of mine about twenty five years ago, the same clinical thought process ..... far to realistic.

NPC01 is a very talented author.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Terrible

What the fuck did she kill herself for? She had good sex already! This did not make me wet at all...

jpb531jpb531about 11 years ago
Very disappointed with the ending

I suppose I can see someone doing that, but it's a real downer to end things that way.

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