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Great and original idea. Both erotic and sad at the same time. Read your youth hostel story as well, which also has an original slant and vivid imagery. Keep up the good work.
English obviously not really your home language as grammar at times is somewhat different However your storyline was great. Imaginative unusual and very entertaining submission. Keep on writing You are well worthwhile reading. If your are interested in transgression ,do you believe Pichler and that transexuals are medically treatable with antiepileptics
English obviously not really your home language as grammar at times is somewhat different However your storyline was great. Imaginative unusual and very entertaining submission. Keep on writing You are well worthwhile reading. If your are interested in transgression ,do you believe Pichler and that transexuals are medically treatable with antiepileptics
I loved the irony of the story and sometimes think that's how it is in real life. Very nice.
... the only person who thought this was hilarious? Truly a delicious little story. Well done!
Now I need to see what else you have submitted.