All Comments on 'Submission'

by JukeboxEMCSA

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Excellent!

That was a great story! I really like the style of slow transformation that the victim doesn't realize is occurring. I've been a fan of your work for a while and know you always put together a quality story. Thank you for sharing!

MCAddictMCAddictover 11 years ago
Amazing.

This is by far my favorite work of yours...I love the descent of Alec (or should I say "alec") into mindless servitude, and I attribute this as the origin of my MC female dominant fetish. Amazing work. Like alec, I await your works with as much excitement (and arousal). Perhaps the power of "Submission" is in the ambiguity of her stories submitted, but I would love to see the cover letters as a sequel...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

If only I could get a copy of those letters. I have a person I'd like to use them on.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
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And I would love to be the person the letters are used upon.

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