All Comments on 'Sue Ann (Swan) Ch. 01'

Keep on writing!

It was short but a good read :)

Nice realistic piece. Keep writing and keeping it real. It is good to have a genuine story like this.

It's a good tale so far. There are some interesting places that you can take this. Keep writing.

I've gotten some really good detailed feedback so I'm taking extra time on the next chapter to incorporate a good deal of that feedback. So hopefully the next chapter will be better, but it means you'll need to be patient.

so-so kind of boring didn't keep my interest up also do some research there is no such thing as a cc cup bra