All Comments on 'Sue Ann (Swan) Ch. 02'

Keep it up man, I've really enjoyed these two stories. The more realistic approach is a lot different than the other over done failure stories

hope you can add more chapters, you are a talented story teller

Please write more. Like the other person said it is great to read the more real stories.

I have never commented on any story, or author before, however I truly enjoyed reading this series, and cannot wait for the next segment. The length of the chapters seem to be balancing out, and the spelling and grammatical errors are minimal. In my opinion, you should try to maintain the current quality without attempting to improve, so you can focus your attention on providing us with more of the story. Thank you for allowing me to express my opinion, and also for sharing your talent with us all.

My home computer died and I just got it replaced. I've had my work computer, but that is not exactly someplace where I can work on stories like this. I'm writing the next chapter now.

Loved your story. I can't wait to read the remaining chapters. I hope that you will be posting the next chapter soon.

Loved this chapter, but where is the promised thire chapter.

I know I promised the next chapter and I apologize for letting you all down, but we have found that my Sue Ann has cancer and we've been battling that. Dealing with that has killed my interest in continuing this story for now. Maybe one day I will finish it but it won't be any time soon.

I do recommend a book to read call "The China Study" it have some information about cancer which I believe you might find helpful.

u need mor eto this story im sooooooo horny

still no third chapter after three years time to either delete the series, find a ghost writer to finish it or delete it. i really doubt he has a sister and is just making excuses for being lazy