All Comments on 'Summer Camp Can Change Your Life'

the parental explosion sounds like a good one, and what happens to these two down the road would be interesting

The story was really a lovely one. One of the loveliest I have read. I don't usually comment on stories. Only on the ones I like. This had a nice storyline and the words were nicely used too. The ending was even more beautiful. Hope to read more such stories from you in future.

This needs at least 1 more chapter.

I agree with the other commenters. Loose ends need to be addressed.

Honestly it was nice, also incredibly unrealistic when it came to anatomy. I suppose stories are made up for fun anyways. Good read but not like to the point of cumming. It's like the incel's dream. I'd be really into it if you had 2 average people ya know? I love the writing a lot and would definitely read another by you if it were like I said :3

calling the conflict "constructed" would be an understatement. the whole story reads like a copy of a story which is the copy of a story written by someone who has never met real humans. maybe AI? you never know.

Such a great start to a story! Where's the rest of it? You left him undecided about a career, her not knowing if her parents would accept her vocation.