All Comments on 'Summer Camp Ch. 03'

Can't wait to find out what happens next. The masturbation was such a good build up to the upcoming sex. It was highly erotic without being the least bit smutty.

Good build up, however i felt you could have left it on more of an unknown, so the reader has to wait until the next chapter to find out if claud's reaction is good or bad, other than that excellent

Long S