All Comments on 'Summer Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Fantastic

Hotter than July....most arousing series I've read here.

KojoteKojoteover 12 years ago
Well...

Fuck me! It's part 3 and the first cock wandered through the picture. And I didn't even miss one before...

That gives the phrase 'slow buildup' a whole new dimension...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

two young men making love to girl ?

wtf

it should be two men pimping out their friend

they displayed her to a stranger had he wanted to rape her i bet these 2 would have let and then joined in for a triple penetration gangbang

leaving sue bloody and injured and alone to die

they coerced her to show her to a pervert under the fake assurance of safety these two think she aint in danger ? i dont think they give a f*** about her to protect her from anyone

these guys are still virgins and claim to know what an exhibitionist is ?

hell i didnt hear the word exhibitionist till i was in college

sue is lucky there were no smartphones otherwise dave would have made her commit suicide post abandonment from her family

poor sue she likes dave but he just think she is a tart

sue not realising she is nothing more than a brutal joke for dave and pete

fuck dave

fuck realism

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Fantastic story. You are indeed a very talented writer!!

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