All Comments on 'Summer Ch. 06 Pt. 09'

been enjoying the story, and I'm impressed the way you Started another viewpoint to the story, then led back right into the where it detoured, and made it look feel like a different perception of the same scene, very nice, I just wish you could add some little historical tidbit in the conversation to give us Yanks a time line of sorts.

finally some girls perspective

i am glad you are calling the guys and alans action wrong this is the only chapter i actually liked in thie series