All Comments on 'Summer Hire Ch. 03'

by brentaden

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fanfarefanfareabout 9 years ago
nice continuation

ba, i like how you are structuring this story. The hints, the insinuations, the confused internal monologue. Little bits of self-depreciating humor scattered throughout. Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Wow! I like this a lot. This is building up nicely. No idea what's going to be next though.

- Th.

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