All Comments on 'Summer in Maine Ch. 01'

Please continue! I have a weakness for Maine ... and hot young virgins.

Extra points for plot and and pace.

The set-up was perfect and the descriptions/ dialogue, interaction felt so real, I thought I was there. Great, great writing.

Thanks for sharing! 5*

I llike this very much. It is so much better than stories that are simply about sex, although I think your descriptions are very good. I much prefer stories that are real stories, not just sex act after sex act. Please keep writing.

How do you teach a wire? And why?

I suspect that you mean taut, or pulled snug, rather than taught, which is the past tense of teach.

I only comment because I saw the same mis-use a little farther on.

I had been so lucky

So sweet a story. What a wonderful introduction to sex for the boy (19, I know). Very few get this lovely a lesson. Of course, I suppose it is also unusual for a woman to have this pleasure of a young man, although almost any of them could have it for the asking. Thanks for sharing your beautiful writing.

every young mans dream

Nice dream.

Absolutely Fantastic Story

Good beginning!

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