All Comments on 'Summer Love'

by tomtom45

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AzPilotAzPilotalmost 14 years ago
Excellent, excellent.

I thought the story plot was very good and that it was very well written. Thank you, sir, for the entertainment.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Good Story with a total crap ending

Readers like happy endings not this shit even if that was how it happened in real life

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Great story

Great beginning to end. Well ended. Both found happiness, even if with others. Bravo.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
An unintended reference to the royal family

In the paragraph about him licking her, we find the phrase "I wanted him to lick me higher up and by guiding his head I was able to move his lips and tongue to the right spot." Camilla, the Duchess of Cornwall, has always had to do that to get Prince Charles to the right place. But he isn't all that bright overall and is a slow learner in bed. So she has to do it every time. Camilla always just grabs him by the ears and now, after 40 years of that, look what it has done to his ears.

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