All Comments on 'Summer Of Discovery Ch. 04'

i would like to read many more stories like this one as it is very very good

I thoroughly enjoyed the first three parts of this series. I'm glad that you're bringing it back for a fourth round.

THAT WAS SOOOO GOOD. I LOVE THESE STORIES AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR YOU TO WRITE MORE, BUT WITH A REALLY HOT FOURSOME. I REALLY WANT TO SEE HOW THEY REACT TO EACH OTHER AND MEL AND MARK'S SECRET. CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!

definitly one of the top ten on the web site. it has absolutly everything you could want. please don't let this end am looking forward to reading many more chapters

This series is one of the best I have read. Thank you and keep writing.

Excellent 5/5 Dialog is stiff but I can't improve it.