by spankedboy
I have enjoyed this story to this point but you blew it with the brutality. During my 40 year career of which over 37 years were as a first responder/paramedic, I got to see quite a bit of the brutality of "he man" dominates done to women for submission and obedience. I got great joy out of having them arrested and seeing them prosecuted. I also saw the other side, women that had done brutal acts to men, some deserved it. So the type of treatment in your story, physical pain and humiliation, when not agreed to by both parties and with a safe word does not sit well. It ruined the story for me.
We waited almost 6 months to see a new chapter,but as a loyal reader for you I expected this chapter is good as the previous ones, but you went fast following your fetish about spanking and spoiled the whole story.
everything was Bang on right from the beginning to the end
been waiting for this since September, I had already masturbated thrice in two days but did two again so 5 times in two days, I've set a new record for myself.
This is how spectacular this one was.
Do take your time for the next release.
the way you mentioned yourself was a good one.
I love this series the most. I almost checked everyday for this upload and can't share how excited I was to see this.
Read the whole in a single go, word by word. Nicely written with focus on minute details. Loved it, please carry this one for as long as you can.
Thanks for all the feedback. I do read and respond to almost all comments so keep 'em coming.
@Kapoor890 - thanks. Hope you enjoyed.
@xsiveone - thank you for your honest opinion but you do know this is erotic fiction, right? Slaps and spanks in sexual roleplay in a consensual relationship cannot be termed as brutality.
@Nirana - glad to see you enjoyed!
@Anon - thanks for your feedback. Yes, spanking is my fetish so I do include it in the stories. Also remember, slow seduction will only work to a certain stage in the story, after which it will be about fucking.
@Nirana - thanks again.
@Anon - thank you.
@Anon - glad you thought it was worth the wait! Happy to have helped you set a record in masturbating lol.
@Anon - thank you.
You and your spanking. Come on man ,what the f..k happens to you'r beautiful story man .i really thought this is it, gonne beat every goddamn story i every red.
But you went with your fetish the goddamn spankin and ruin the fun out . Very sad
The title says it all, excess of build up, excess of fetish is bad for this series. The story line has potential but these last updates were just average.
when are the next chapters coming in?
Just way too excited for the next parts, and anxious about the other aunts and how this one will turn up.
Carry onto others as well. This is your best series till now.
Following this series from chapter 1 and this wait was frustrating but totally worth it. Though things went to fast in this one, I was expecting it to be a bit more slow.
But it's your story a surprise element is always welcome.
when's the next chapters rolling, last time you said 6,7,8 will come together
Your series has the potential and would do good if you keep on writing instead of posting an episode in 3-4 months or so .. Please expand to other aunts and also get the scenes more raunchy . You can check my series for Indian aunts .. if you want some inspiration.
I am a big fan of this series and was looking forward to all the chapters after ch 05. I must admit it has not lived up to the expectations. Different people have different opinion but the way it was crafted since beginning was the three different characters in the aunties we see in the story telling. Shaheena being the most difficult one to get through and boom! In this chapter she is giving blow jobs like a slut. I am nobody to judge your writing but being a big fan of your writing, I know you can be better. I would love if you continue the excitement matching to the ones we saw in the former chapters. Just an input "Maybe Mamu arrives and she has realised what she has got herself into but then Nazu seduces her and does her in the most erotic way, of course when Mamu is away." kudos and all the best you are the best man. Thanks
I don't want this series to end... Kindly post the next chapter asap
I loved this series bro... Slow and hot.. I would like to suggest that pay more attention on mamis big boobs..
Excepting lengthy foreplay and steamy sex... Women on top is my favorite pls add that too
Pls post as soon as possible
You said 6,7,8 will come together, where are they mate ?
Expecting the next part soon... It ll be a bonus if u post 7th and 8th part together
Please publish the next chapter very soon. This is the most interesting series you have published as of late.
Excellent erotic story writing if you could all the series part fully readers will enjoy hopefull you will be uploading
Any updates on the timeline for the next parts? Waiting for the big bang.
Hi. When is part 7. Please send me your email I will pay you for it!!
Are you alright or is that someone spilled hot water on you too? Okay jokes apart, post real quick please. Thank you.
waiting for the hardcore anal sex with Shaheen and lick her anus. also want see her swimming in bra panty with her nephew