All Comments on 'Summer Rain'

Went a little too quick for my liking, still stirred me inside though.

I enjoyed reading this story, you need to continue with it. What happens next?

I always like a little bit more build up. I'd really like to know if there is something else going to happen. Nothing wrong with a quickie and leaving 'em wanting more. But I really want more.

no real back ground to tell what thier relationship was like before this. this is like reading a book with the first chapter missing in other words not worth the time to read get a good editor and do a rewrite adding some back ground.

DBRS

But at least we didn't have to suffer through a sleazy rite up of a sleazy porno cum shot.

I suppose that was brief enough!

That was a great quickie!

The reason that Hunter and Alice's fuck is so quick and abrupt in this great story is that they've been repressing the urge for each other for so long. As the brother and sister grow up together, they catch exciting glimpses of what each has between their legs that's "different." Hunter sees his baby sister's adorable little coochie and is awed by how pretty it is, the prettiest thing he's ever seen in his life. Alice sees her big brother's meaty cock hanging over his loaded balls and a thrill goes through her--there's power between her big brother's legs. He feels like slipping a finger or two in her little coochie. She feels like giving his soft hanging cock a playful little tug. These thoughts have been festering in the minds of the siblings for years, and now the moment is right. Hunter is harder than ever before, his cock is reaching for the sky, and Alice's sweet snatch is dripping down her legs like a river. Only one possible solution--that big brotherly cock goes up that cute sisterly cunt. Look, it's happening all the time, all over the country, tens of thousands, hundreds of thousands of siblings, maybe even more, are doing what would give their poor parents a heart attack if they ever knew. No reason they ever have to know. The kids are smart, and devious. They're overjoyed that they can have real down and dirty boy-girl fun right in their own home with a person they love to pieces, and they make damn sure that nothing's going to endanger their fun. The brother makes his sister cum like crazy, and he's bursting with boyish pride seeing her body wracked with pleasure. He blows his brotherly balls up his baby sister's warm wet twat, filling her with his creamy semen, and his sister is glowing with girlish pride that her tight little twat can do that for her beloved big brother. It's happening everywhere, people, every day and night of the week, so we'd all better just get used to it and let the kids have their innocent fun.

will you be posting the story soon?