by DaddysSlutToy
Please keep them coming! Just don't have "daddy" turning his daughter into a whore.
I really enjoyed these 2 chapters! I would love to read more please!!!! ;)
:p i loved it! by far one of the best incest stories iv ever read! are you writting more?
Id love to find out if Tom is going to join in the fun!
Great beginnings; nicely written and good imagery. These two stories will be well coupled with a whole summertime's worth of shorts =) So, do please come back and add to them. This set up is too hot and exciting to leave it where it's at right now.
Your story is progressing nicely, I think daddy is going to teach and learn lots from his little girl.
I love the time you take on the small things, as well as the sex. Can't wait for Chapter two
Very sexy again. Your strength here isn't so much in developing your characters as developing your scenario, which is all you need. I liked the feeling of anticipation-- and especially the shopping scenes.