by jeremygrey
can't wait for next chapter(group sex with shell, sis & mom should be invovled )still need/would like back story on shell and her mom and how sis knew he was fucking shell's mom
Please continue with this. Good characters & pacing with lots more possibilities & relationship developments to explore. Shame you didn't give more detail on the second tryst with Shell's Mother. There were also a few grammatical errors, but still voted 5 stars.
Truly one of best second chapters. All brothers and sisters should have opportunity of uninhibited love.
Good story but needs to be edited into proper English to make it way more readable.