All Comments on 'Summer with Shell Ch. 02'

by jeremygrey

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brosismombrosismomabout 11 years ago
good

can't wait for next chapter(group sex with shell, sis & mom should be invovled )still need/would like back story on shell and her mom and how sis knew he was fucking shell's mom

amsterdamamsterdamover 8 years ago
Sweet story

Please continue with this. Good characters & pacing with lots more possibilities & relationship developments to explore. Shame you didn't give more detail on the second tryst with Shell's Mother. There were also a few grammatical errors, but still voted 5 stars.

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooabout 7 years ago
Beautiful love story sequel

Truly one of best second chapters. All brothers and sisters should have opportunity of uninhibited love.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Good story but needs to be edited into proper English to make it way more readable.

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