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I stretch, groping for his lingering smell, and find a note beneath my pillow. I know I still owe you, it reads. Six scrawled words, two twenties and a handful of coins. That's all he'd left.
It's more than I deserve.
I take the note with me into the morning glare. When I can see again all I can do is stare at the mysteries of the Almighty.
On both sides of a road leading away from the highway are rows and rows of sunflowers, their yellow manes ablaze as far as the eye can see, saluting the sun, every one of them, from dawn till dusk, wherever it goes.
Knowing that Mac would have seen this too almost makes me laugh.
I put the note with the postcard and clip them to the dashboard. I dress quickly and fire up the ignition.
I look into the sun and remember -
He'd wanted to go east.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 10 years agoPoorly written; poor readers who believe otherwise. The writer must have composed this tongue-in-cheek but anticipating that some Lit readers would fall for it. What might this say about the author?
yeomanieabout 12 years ago... I loved painting donovan just sorry its not finished - would you let me write a chapter or two for you?
this tho ... this is just awesome. its poetry and prose and sex and porn and love all follado into one. I hope whatever you're doing now involves writing and getting recognised for it!
Anonymousover 12 years agoWow.
Wow...
I know you must get compliments like this all the time but.
You are a fucking amazing author. Or authoress. Writer.
I don't even.. So good.... I feel like you mixed poetry in with your story... Two pages filled with so much emotion and thoughts...
Anonymousover 12 years agoYou really have a way with words. Update Painting Donovan.. uh, Pretty Please:-)
SoullessCynnerover 13 years agoBeautiful, haunting, despairing.... It's a bit confusing, but the words are definitely beautiful. I'd like to see more of these two. I'd really like a happy ending, because right now, after reading this, I feel.... despair, yet slightly hopeful. I really like this story.
--Soulless
