by Panthem
No One Noticed
The Ides of March? This was the only way her story could end. Signed: BTW
Sorry, way too dark to be a good read for me. That said, the little details, like the feel of grit under her feet gave it richness
I just seem to connect with your writing, and this story is another example of that. Part of what I really like about this is the unanswered questions this leaves. Yet, you want to know more. Thanks for writing.
I'm glad you're back and writing! I love your stories. Though I do hope the palpable pain in this story isn't yours. Extremely well written (as usual). <3
I wrote a longer comment but it went into ??? I loved this story. Such despair and sadness. Thank you for the write. Jim
Thanks for writing! I thought you'd disappeared form the scene and I was so glad to see a new story on your profile (which I check religiously!...)
I love this. Short and sweet but with a twist and a kick at the end. Not your usual genre (though there is always a fraught love connection somewhere!), but it's definitely 'pure Panthem': raw, gutsy and a joy to read. More where this came from, please!!
Thanks for the comment. Most of my stuff I write with my audience in mind. I think I wrote this one for me. Which explains why it's different, I suppose. At any rate, I certainly do appreciate you letting me know you enjoyed it. -P