All Comments on 'Supercock'

by Leythe

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
I didn't.....

Like the way you ended this. You took it from being a great story of Sci fi and Incest into forced. He didn't have to do that. He could have been a different person.

Wildman28Wildman28almost 10 years ago
not bad

I agree the ending could have been better. But overall a good read lookin forward to the next one.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Good read, needs a sequel

I like the ending cause it leaves a lot of potential and hints at more to come.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
He may have unleashed a monster

What happens if she develops an obsession with stimulating her penis? What happens if she feels the urge for penetrative sex and big brother is the only one available? She's super fast and may be much stronger than he.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
glans, not glands

There are not glands on the end of the penis, it is glans. It is "it", not "they". As in, "the glans is sensitive", not "the glans are sensitive".

Enjoyed it otherwise, looking forward to the next installment.

silverwolf88silverwolf88almost 10 years ago

More chapters I want read more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Please more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
More!

Yea, have Rae screw Ethan hard in the ass or even make her screw her friend. I think it would be awesome if Rae got a second dick somehow and then screwed her friend and her brother at the same time. :)

Ladd_RussoLadd_Russoalmost 10 years ago

Really great work! I loved this story, and really really hope we'll see a second chapter.

QuiveringErectionQuiveringErectionover 9 years ago
WOW

That was hot. More!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
More?

More when?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
So Hot!

Oh wow, this was so hot! I'm a straight guy, but even I want to suck on her cock :P

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