All Comments on 'Superf***er Vol. 05'

by DrSqueaky

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Excellent latest chapter!!

I've been checking since your last chapter, hoping for more story. I enjoyed how you worked out that a different approach was needed to meet Bill's goal and that Crystal was willing to help. I look forward to scenes of Bill's future willing partners. I enjoy the sex scenes but I'm mainly intrigued by how the story ends and - at the very end - does Bill decide to stay on Earth after all? I thought I had commented on all your chapters but apparently not. I will go back and comment on all I need to. Thanks for a very interesting story!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
ANOTHER MASTERPIECE

The idea of Bill rejoining Crystal, meeting a son, her converting from hostile to helper are more showings of DrSqueaky's genius. Crystal's idea of using the Internet -- just great -- and the copy of the ad. The intriguing new facets to the plot line just keep coming.

Paul in Oklahoma

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