All Comments on 'Supremacy'

I have no words for this story.

I hated this story...no reflection on the author's writing skills, just NOT a story I would have even started had I any idea where it would end up!

LOL! You're nuts!! :)

Just because it is possible to do a thing does not mean that a thing should be done. You certainly have the ability to write a story, but do all stories need to be written? If an already written story can be published, it does not necessarily need to be published. There is no story in this story, it is simply a series of events that contain no greater unifying force or structural cohesion. Your expository abilities are not in question. Additionally, any question of that ability have been summarily answered by this submission. There is however a severe lack of plot, character development, and resolution. Finishing your story I had four questions. What did I just read? Why did I have to read it? How does it end? Lastly and most importantly, Why should you care - its just a random story thrown together because someone could??? The answer is a unilateral and resounding Stop, dont waste your time, this is not a Story, it's just a collection of words. Do better in the future.