All Comments on 'Surf God of Malibu Ch. 02'

I just discovered this story today...how did I miss it before I do not know. Will there be a chapter 3 and more perhaps? It broke my heart when Jacob said " I am gambling everything on you. Don't hurt me." Well paced and well done. LOL at the margarine. I learn more sex stuff reading gay stories than I do reading straight ones. lol

I want an epilogue to know these two gentle souls made it through this world together.

That their love wasn't limited to the confines of that tiny shack and that Peter stepped up to tell the world that beautiful Jacob is his one and only love. To know Jacob didn't leave one form of Hell for another. He and his love need to be acknowleged by Peter.

Their relationship needs to be cemented in a mutual love that will lead Jacob to become a strong, equal partner to Peter who needs to leave the macho "surfer dude" bullshit behind him and become secure as a man capable of loving another man in every way possible.

crap wont bother with the 3rd installment of boring thanks

So great.... both guys are so cute but in different ways, and the way they fumble around is sexy

Great writing...I can feel their fear, their lust and their need to know about themselves and each other!