All Comments on 'Surprise Sleepover With Brother'

Certainly made me wet!

I liked it but it could have gone longer

Great Story and I'm glad that there are more to read.

Please please please keep writing

That is, without question, the best 'sister has friends sleep over' story I've ever read! I only see one problems: the story is too short. :)<br>

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I hope there will be a chapter two. There are still two more girls there, and he's there for the weekend. Here's a thought: maybe something happens (car problems?) and the parents have to stay away for another night. ;)

Is there going to be more or not???

the ass play came in. Not that it was bad just should have saved that for a later story. This story is supposed to be over the top but that kept it from being 100. Keep it up...

that it?that all?

A woman who is five feet tall (plus an inch or two) can't be a 36A unless she's a flat-chested fatso. An A-cup is a small breast. B is larger, C is bigger yet, and D is very big. Got it? The number doesn't refer to their size, but how big their chest is. A very short girl with a 32-D means a petite girl with large breasts. The same girl with a 36-D would be a very curvy, plump even, girl with large breasts. A tall girl with 34-A tits is a tall, very thin, woman with small breasts. The same girl with a 34-D is a thin woman with big tits. Take a measuring tape and encircle your chest, keep it level, and let it cross over your nipples. THAT'S the number part of the formula. The Letter refers to the size and shape of the tits.

Also, it helps if you include all three measurements: 5'2" with 34-C - 22 - 32, would be a small, curvy girl. 5'2" with 32-B - 22 - 32, would be more petite girl with smaller (but average size) tits.

It makes it hard to suspend disbelief while reading erotica when you've got such glaring discrepancies. If you've got no clue about what numbers to write down, do a little research. The information is out there. All you have to do is find a celeb or an actress (porn stars are great material for this, duh!) and see what their measurements are.

I really hope this helps you.

but that's OK sometimes. An MFFF like that looked good, then you had to start with the asses. Anal rates an automatic 1, no matter what else the story has.

I've fucked several of my sisters friends as well as having a very "special" relationship with my sister but never had a threesome. Sis and I tried to get my wife involved but she's too weird-ed out. She doesn't mind our relationship she just can't picture herself eating Sis's pussy while I fuck her brains out

Brother sister sex is the greatest and additional friends are a delightful bonus . Wonderful story.

Anal is amazing! I don't see how someone could rate a story down just because it has some anal, if you don't like anal, just stop reading and find another story.

This was so poorly done I couldn't finish it. You're obviously a guy. The language you use is a dead give away. Please don't write anymore.

Bull shit

.. but WORTH READING (for a man) :-D

loved it.

I wish i had a hot slutty sister like that so that i could cum in her ass too

Very nice! Really liked the story.

Well the story looked like it might be interesting, then it just sort of rushed to the ending. The guy barely stuck his dick in his sister for starters, and for a chick that had never even seen a dick before, you would think he might have a bit more trouble getting in ms. Virgin. ...then the whole ass thing. Dont get me wrong, I dont have a problem with anal, its just fine, I have a problem with bad/bullshit anal. ...and just ramming it in a virgin ass without real lube and without stretching her a bit, then she just loooooves it right from the start?? Not. ...so what sex we got was just so bogus that it kinda ruined the great buildup we were getting! Sigh. Good premise though, cant go wrong with three horny girls, horny older brother, and for once the guy isnt whining about fucking his sister, lol!

That's it? Liked what we got, but it's just a good beginning. Good start disappointing finish, kind of like cheap wine.

You can tell it was written by a guy with very little experience.

Reads like a terrible male fantasy from a 15 year old; rampant objectification and a complete lack of understanding of real intimacy and what sex is actually like. Unfortunately cringeworthy.