All Comments on 'Suzanne'

Brilliant, leaves so much to the imagination, and leaves a door to express so much more. Thanks.

Talk about BORRRRRRRRRRR-ing!

Stick to comic books!

spelling

Possibly English not first language.

I'd love to know what comes next.

No this was not a hard climax story...but it was the beginning to a 2nd chapter. As for the one that was saying alot of mistakes....Bite Me....and u know where :) If they were on her for correct english, than I believe they are on the wrong site.

A nice start.. looks like to could be really hot..

Ignore the bozo making comments about your spelling, it passed my spell-checker just fine.

Has the potential for additional chapters. I hope they will come soon,

Could be so true

Joslyn and I saw Walayne and Vivian at a party, sitting on a couch in a hallway, stealing kisses when there weren't people moving past. It looked so cute and also sexy. We walked up to them and Jos said, "We can smell the heat between you." We knelt in front of our friends to hug them. Jos was right! In the micro-climate between the four of us, the insistent scent of womansex just took control.