All Comments on 'Swapping Husbands Ch. 01'

Great story - can't wait for the next part

Get started on next part. Great story line.

Really fine story. Looking forward to the next chapter. Ignore the anonymous jerks out there. They get off by criticizing others. You are doing great.

share your STD also. Swap stories like yours are flooding this site and the plot are the same.For an over 18 first timer writer your story bores me.

Stories about consenting adults engaging in vanilla sex are boring. If you want to make this interesting, you will have to introduce some inequality, jealousy, and consequences.

Good start!!!

A little different perspective on am old theme. Taking a while to get there, but I'll be around for the 2nd chapter. Thanks

no way, I do not swap my wife. not even for a BJ . A BJ is always just A

starting place for swapping . A BJ only works for me if I want it to. most of

the time it is just a starting point. a 1 for you mike.

nothing these 4 people do will penetrate their blunt skulls, so what the hell?

I found this to be a generally enjoyable story that held up until the end and begged for more. It is not too hard to anticipate which direction this river is flowing, but it is a direction that lives only in fantasy for most of us.

For this to be more than a stroke story, it needs plausible surprises and/or conflicts. Currently, the only conflicts appear to be how long things will be delayed until the inevitable occurs. However, the BJ Kathy gave to an old acquaintance definitely fit the category of a plausible surprise.

For the anonymous trolls, I think there is a setting on your profile that will allow you to prohibit anonymous posts.

I look forward to Ch. 02.

...never have done anything for me.

As for the tale, I frankly had to skip to the last page after I saw the pace the first page set and how many pages this story contained. As such I don't feel right rating it.

Was VERY obvious where this tale was heading from the first page though. Idiot husbands.

I like the way this has started off with one exception. While they have not, as a set of couples, discussed the options and limitations by have at leat done o with their spouses. The one serious exception was the blowjob to he exboyfriend. I'm pretty sure this broke the general rules and trust between Greg and Kathy. I can see where she thinks its okay, especially with alcohol involved, but if she doesn't realize her error the marriage is destined for failure. I hope you will keep them open and tat they will respect their own spouse enough to play well but play smart.

very enjoyable bit of a slow burner but with infinite possibilities. look forward to part2

Some ability there if you can keep going with blow jobs for six pages!

The next part will be epic if you can keep going!

The only one who will come out of this any better will be the divorce lawyers!

I think that Kathy's 'old flame' BJ will do a lot to enhance her confidence.

The original 'BJ learning rules' have largely been swept aside - it will not be long before it is 'full-on No-Holds-barred' swapping as mixed couples, single couple, or lez, with no need to pre-announce (but probably after-the-fact notification)!

5*

I hope we have a part two!!!

The 3 left out 1 hubby he is wemp or kickher to thecurb

I think you should write a little part about Kathy's discussion with her high school crush and what happen when she brought him outside

Loved this story, please continue

Have you noticed the only assholes who knock your story are the ones who don't have enough balls to leave their name!! I have the same problem. I only noticed one person leaving their name with a negative comment. Disregard those idiots, I loved the story and no it didn't drag on, the story built to a great ending. Hope to see a part 2 keep up the good work, you may want to delete negative comments from Anonymous puritanical assholes. If they can't leave their names, their comments shouldn't be relevant.

Don't seem like conservative wives to me. And perhaps an editor to cut down on some of the unnecessary parts? Mostly unbelievable. But the best laugh was reserved for the commentator (Baranbrat) that wanted to eliminate Anon comments. Is Baranbrat your first or last name? Whether people post under "Anonymous" or a fictitious name like Baranbrat they are ALL unkown entities.

Different people like different stories, and despite other comments I thoroughly enjoyed it and looked for Ch 02. Look forward to reading it when you write it.

when is chapter 2 appearing??????

Delicious. Just what I would like to do but Haven't yet.

Sensuous writing.

Alison

please write ch02

I know I've read a similar themed story several years ago. Or perhaps it's how several.of our friends approached each other to begin a wilder side into an open marriag. I / WE enjoyed your sensuality detailed planning and mutually agreeable execution to the shared seduction. You realize you now have a fan club supporting and encouraging your continued efforts to expose your characters future. You know you want to ... and have let your own imagination visualize so many options. There are so.many years of life experience ahead for this special 4-some ... and their close friends. Give us cause to check back SOON for the next level toward full.consumation and the Rest Of The Story. It's what Paul Harvey might have really wanted to do

When is part 2 to appear? Great start, but you must follow through. How about teasing with underwear?

Please give us chapter two soon.

Thank you for sharing your story with us.

brujay

More! Please finish this. You are really good.

Such a turn on, have to see how much farther they go, Greg got off but the other hubby and his 9inches of fun needs to get in between Kathys tits. Honestly this is a great story such a turn on...

I didn't like the part where she went outside and cheated with the other guy. That wasn't part of the arrangement. But great story other than that. Hope there will be more stories to follow.

I loved the length and the pace. The characters were all believable as was the story line from my own experiences. Good job

Keep writing.

Hope you write again, very well done.

Very Good. My only concern is the high school friend BJ.

Loved your story. It was a little long. I have done this four of my sisters. I only got the better with Don. That tall red head had a 10 inch cock! My sisters love mu husband in bed. He just ravishes them. I have to go and get him to stop. It was once very embarresing for my sister, when her husband watched her cum from just fucking. He claimed she could only cum from oral. Graet times!

A fricken hot story

More, more more!! Next chapter ASAP! Besides this 4some, tell more of the BJ with the friend.

now, see what you did there,,thats just not fair,,,thats plain mean,,,left me hanging,,well written, well paced,,really liked it.

Underneath it all, just another cheating whore.

They're just cheap sluts.

Noting two other comments describing Kathy and Brennen sluts and whores allow me.judge not others so you not also be judged! This coming from life long suffering the aftermath of brutal religious indoctrination from a very young age. Sex is a sin if not married. Mastrubation is a sin. Penis will fall off from mastrubation….

Great! Looking forward to a sequel

Well done! Marked down for mixing up the names of the players. Otherwise it was suspenseful and erotic. Good descriptions of the actions and motivation. Very hot.

No ! It can't stop there. I need more please. Great piece of work. Thank you.

Oh, I so wish the author would continue. Totally worth the time to build up and incremental pushing of boundaries. Hoping the author revisits, but totally believe this is is a stub that shall not be finished. :-( But totally a 5-star effort.

5 stars. Seems like you dropped off the face of the earth. Would have been great for a part 2 with full wife swapping. Oh well, can't have everything you wish for.

Damn good. Where did you go? Wish you could add a part 2 or even part 3. 5 stars +++++. would really like to see a 4 some on the one bed swapping back and forth.

Its ""cum"" not "come"!!!! liked the story,,,needed to be edited...

That is about as good as it gets!!!!!

Where might one find their Part 2?

Alas, a really decent story published in July of 2013 that sadly will probably never have a follow up ☀️