All Comments on 'Sweet Cherie Ch. 01'

This is usually when you claim there was a "streaking" bet on the game and someone lost-- while the other goes out to the car maybe-- lol can't wait to see if you finish this one. LOL

Loved this one! Almost been caught myself like this!

I have a cousin that I did not see much when we were growing up (parents divorced). When we saw each other as adults, there was an instant reaction between us... we get together now and then for sex... the last time we spent an hour exploring and enjoying each other.

I loved it! I can hardly wait for the next chapter...(pun intended).

when i was with my non-blood cousin we would always take our time until her parents got home,

way to many extra words, wrong words etc. this needs a total rewrite you should be ashamed of yourself for posting a first draft. either do it right or not at all delete and rewrite then run it through a good editor before reposting.