All Comments on 'Sweet Dreams Are Made of This Ch. 01'

by Innuendos

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AverygoodlayAverygoodlayabout 12 years ago
Good story

Good story if not drawn out about the first girlfriend and then the uneventful and somewhat strange second girlfriend.

Then there was the third girlfriend where they did have sex but not very descriptive.

Hopefully the next story will have a little more detail than they had sex.

Gave it a 3* as it still has promise.

NymphMyosotisNymphMyosotisabout 12 years ago
Well written!

I did enjoy your story and found it really well written and nicely descriptive. I'll be looking toward the next one!

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