All Comments on 'Sweet Lena'

There are a couple problems - not big, and the story is still a 5, but ....

The narrator is 55 and writing books to support his quest for tenure? At 55 he'd be on the academic garbage pile - it is up or out and .... doesn't matter I just don't like seeing "facts" tossed in the improve the backstory that aren't accurate

The narrator's description of sex with grad students or assistants - well written, but by 2007 fucking your students was akin to juggling butcher knives - a dozen very very sharp ones Maybe you'd get away with it - risk/reward ratio awful -

THAT WAS MIND BLOWING I JUST WISH...YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE..

HER MOTHERS TURN AND SHE SHOULD HAVE THE NEIGHBORS BABY

Fantastic!

You have an amazing talent for writing erotic stories. I came very hard while reading this in bed just like I promised you earlier today. ;)

haven't I ever read you before? This is the ultimate in erotic story-writing: sensuous, exciting, arousing, and OMG, literate as well! You certainly hit all my pleasure spots. Full marks and a high distinction.

I loved it. Thanks.

You certainly have a way of describing sexual pleasures. I think I will go and fuck my little Mexican honey as soon as I'm done writing. Thank You !!

The muff diving scene (ie. pussy eating) literally made my mouth water and my senses reel. Tried "hard" not to mention the throbbing sensation experienced elsewhere, but felt compelled to do so, since a hard cock is a barometer of how hot a story is. This story is the first one read in 2007 that will surely win a Golden Clit Award. Thanks Professor!

This story was fantastic. It was excellently written (both with regard to a cogent, flowing plot and also with regard to grammar and mechanics). I'm eagerly awaiting similar tales...

nice lines, normally mature male young nubile etc is my thing, but this is a great cup of tea, thanks and regards.

Well written. Sexy. Sensuous. Felt like I knew both of them.

Eagerly awaiting the next chapters.

Traveller

This is the best story I've read in a very long time. You took time to develop a complete story; it was well written; the grammar was excellent. It doesn't get any better than that. Thank you for sharing.

Some of the literary hacks here, those that often think of them themselves as authors but aren't, should read, study and learn from this excellent piece of erotic literature.