All Comments on 'Sweet Mess'

Very erotic story, with delightful attention to all the details and good characterization. My favorite part was: "There was something fluid in his gender. It surprised her, but shouldn't have; she had the same dichotomy present within herself. Poly was a girly girl with balls, and Flowers was a sensitive songwriter that fucked like an animal. He possessed the ability to move seamlessly between that very attractive quality of decisive manliness and total surrender." Keep up the great work, you are very talented.

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