All Comments on 'Sweet Surrender'

I loved this story. Not only do you become arroused, you want a man just like luke. X x

I absolutely loved your story...I am a BBW from a very small town in South Carolina...and honestly its amazing how much Emily's attitude and mine are similar..After 36 years I have learned to embrace my sarcastic nature...And I love being a big southern girl..Thanks again for the great read

I am a BBW myself and I found the love of my life on an airplane ride as well !!! I was going to Aruba and on the flight I began talking to a man I had never met before. Once we landed we went straight our hotel,he came to my room and we had sex for six hours non-stop. we were married two weeks later and are still together after 27 years.

Sue in Aberdeen

So when will we realize that we don't all have to look like Brad and Angelina to be happy? Reading work like this makes it possible to believe that it's OK to be who you are, even if you don't fit the mold. Bravo!

Actually, it's a beautiful story, but it is marred by a very, very serious need of some good editing. (Typos, omitted words, extra words, etc, etc.) As I said, the storyline itself is delightful. Keep writing.

-- KK in Texas

love the characters. good descriptions of emotions and feelings. I enjoyed the banter ... it had nice up and down, sweet and nasty quality without being overdone. I would have liked to have more at the end, another chapter or two.

First of all, I'm always a sucker for a Military man and would -love- to find one like Luke. The story kept me enthralled the whole time and makes me want to hop on a plane in hopes of sitting next to a guy like that!!

Thank you for the story I loved it.

I loved everything but the end. You spent all that time developing characters and then just dropped us on our heads - ouch! I would have liked at least a part 2 and maybe a part 3? I enjoyed the read and hope you will treat us with more. Many thanks.

You developed great characters, I love their chemistry from the start. Seriously, if you added 400 more pages and a price tag I would have brought it in a heartbeat! Emmie and Luke are so cute together and I love the fact she is a BBW and a southern girl like myself! So refreshing to read characters that are so different from the norm. I wish you would of had more of an ending for them but a great read either way. Your going into my favorites!!!

The Whiskers joke was HIGHlarious! Going back to finish now. Thanks for the fit of choking laughter.

What a lovely ,sexy loving story with loveable characters

I pissed myself laughing throughout this entire story! Bloody marvellous!!! Thanks so much for this most hilarious, sexy and heartfelt tale of lust, love and life! So very cool!

The story was great... until the rushed ending (which is why I gave it 4 stars instead of 5)... The typos and misspelled words detracted a bit from my reading enjoyment, but needless to say, not enough to ruin the story for me. Keep writing, just get someone to proof-read for you, and don't rush your endings... You really do have talent!

Almost as if the writer got horny and needed to masturbate hard and finished it off quick.

This was honestly the greatest story I have ever read. My heart felt it deeply. I wish it was a book that had way more details that I could read over and over again. Her insecurities with her body made me think of my own and had me crying. And then their passionate love making had me coming. I project that I will be rereading this over and over again.

I absolutely loved this beautiful story. The ending warmed my heart

Rush ending but you made a part two...?that makes no sense