All Comments on 'Sweet Surrender'

This is one of the best written and erotic stories I have read here in a long time. Cleverly matched with a dual time frame setting which takes nothing away from the eroticism and intensity of feeling conveyed by the writer....something many fail at doing successfully.

oh god, that was an excellent story...more of kayla and aimee please!!!

This was more than just a hot story, it was good writing. I don't know who I wanted to be more, Kayla or Aimee! I've shared it with my love.....I think I've picked up a few ideas from it!!

Now let me see.....where is that profile......

Have mercy on me..... what incredible writing.

Please tell us there are episodes to cum.... pretty please????

This story was amazing.. i'm sending my girl the link right now....

I so dearly love a hot and sexy lesbian bdsm story!

I can't believe this is only your first submission..and I surely hope it won't be your last!

Now this is hot!

not only am I into this kind of stuff, your writing has given me a couple ideas. This is very well written I will be having some interesting dreams tonight. ^_^

Normally I'm not into domme-sub topics, but this story was terrific! The sexual tension was so high throughout. Masterful storytelling!